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Villain Month: Richard Khiro Appraisal

Since I’m now in the last week of developing this character, I thought I’d take a step back and see what I’ve done so far and where I need to go next.

After writing a few excerpts from his POV, I feel comfortable with his personality and dialogue. His past is still sketchy, as is more in-depth information like his favorite color or book. I also need to explore his more tender, human moments; perhaps a few scenes with Tabitha, the one woman he truly loved.

This Sunday I’ll finish him up with another character sheet workout and put him through a Mary Sue test for giggles.

  1. June 9, 2008 at 1:22 pm | #1

    After seeing him as a monster for so long, seeing him a bit softer would be interesting. Looking forward to it! :)

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